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PostSubject: poetry!!! from the heart!!! ps sad   Tue Mar 03, 2009 9:48 pm

This in my opinion is my best poem Smile what do you think :
as days are pasting by
i become numb inside
thoughts of you runnin through
when will they subside
how can i sit here
not to tell you how i feel
where is my release
plz someone help me deal
pain at its highest peak
fear that you won't care
what i have to say
kill me if you dare
traces of the pain i feel
i wonder if you can see
my heart burnin to have you here
will you be with me
tell me you care
show me how you feel about this
are you goin to stay with her
this meaning plz dont miss
now i must say goodbye
i must try to survive
think about it
dont let me die
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PostSubject: Re: poetry!!! from the heart!!! ps sad   Tue Mar 03, 2009 9:51 pm

nice. im gonna start postin some of me own literature on here. its gonna be awesome.
but urs is better than mine.
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PostSubject: Re: poetry!!! from the heart!!! ps sad   Tue Mar 03, 2009 9:57 pm

not reallly alot of the time i get tongue tied and don't finish the poem :- \
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PostSubject: Re: poetry!!! from the heart!!! ps sad   Mon Apr 13, 2009 8:39 pm

Unnamed

the bears are waking
the stares are quaking
the sites of you were breath taking

you stopped the tears
settled all my fears
realizing someone cares

you bring the smiles
and rest a whiles
talking about iles

arguing begains
loving starts to mend
as heart begin to bend

the fear once again
could it all here end
i do not know my friend

questions never dying
at night i fine my self crying
but still denying

futures unclear to see
wondering about the free
i feel like i am falling out of a tree

heart screaming
not knowing meaning
wanting then waiting

but I'm still here debating

the questions who
no body knew
pleding for you

confusion stuck
out of luck
my heart is struck

unknowing wishes
missing your kisses
and hugs

running from the truth
i haven't got a clue
what to choose

hoping someone will take me out
as i sit here to doubt
about these strugles
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PostSubject: Re: poetry!!! from the heart!!! ps sad   Mon Apr 27, 2009 3:19 pm

awsome dark angel awsome and i think i might do like fireblade
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